My rating: 3 of 5 stars
I really liked the concept. I thought that reading from Judy's Diary was an interesting way to go about telling a story going from third person to first person. I liked her journey, and the writing about the period in time was vivid, transporting you to the time when women wore dresses, were expected to get married and have kids, and everyone smoked. Even the music was a great character for the plot. Telling about the changing of the guard from crooners to rock-n-roll.
There never was a real explanation for Judy's hightened senses and abilities, which I think I would have liked to have known. Also the fact that her mother and stepfather were drunks, and not very nice ones, I would have thought that Judy would have avoided that trap. Although, she didn't seem to be a mean one or hurt her son in any way, I just thought it was interesting that she would would start drinking so early in her life and it would be something that her son would have remembered her doing often.
The story flowed well until it go to the end. It was almost like the writer didn't know how to end it and so he just had Roberto find her quickly. I would have liked to have know who Martin's father was, how Judy got to Chicago, as well as if Gina, Martin's Daughter, did inherit Judy's abilities.
Judy's abilities were explained well for the most part. As I don't know karate, I had a little trouble know what she did especially when the author was explaining how she got the upper hand on the guy from the bar in Texas who had her in a bear hug from the back. But, I didn't mind it. I love action movies, comics and anime. This just reminded me of some of those. I almost feel like this would have been great as a comic.
Although I liked the story and if flowed well in the beginning, keeping my attention, I still think it could have been better.
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