ANYTHING HE WANTS by Sara Fawkes

Anything He Wants by Sara Fawkes
My rating: 2 of 5 stars

I wanted to like this more. There were parts that were exciting, like trying to figure out who is after Jeremiah and Lucy. I also feel like the author set up a believable scenario where Lucy would agree to Jeremiah's offer of work doing "Anything He Wants" due to her lack of finances, her staying with a friend but wearing out her welcome.

The author sort of mentions that Lucy has had an interesting sex drive although never had a chance or inclination to pursue it. But she falls into a BDSM relationship with Jeremiah.

I would have liked to have had more with Celeste and Cherise as possible friends for Lucy. I get that she was isolated by Jeremiah for her own safety, but his obsession with doing everything and not keeping others in the loop is ridiculous. I don't really understand why Lucas took off and didn't try to prove his innocence. I also don't understand what's going on with trying to kill Jeremiah and how Anya could have been talked into hiring a hit man. She'd worked for Jeremiah and should have known the reality of the situation no matter what others said to her.

I liked Lucas and I actually hope Lucy goes off with him as that would show Jeremiah. He obviously cares for her and his pushing her away isn't good for her. If he cares for her as much as I think he does this makes no sense in the story.

I would consider reading the second book, if there's going to be a second book if there's a good editor who can help with the story and structure of the book. The writer is good with ideas, but needs help with the writer. The best thing is that the book was quick and short.

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